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The study was conducted in two parts, the first part involved collecting data on student preferences for various subjects taught in their school curriculum over a period of three months. The second phase included analyzing this data to determine which subjects students preferred most and least.
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A comprehensive survey project was initiated in our institution, comprising two distinct stages designed to elucidate students' inclinations towards different subject areas within the standard academic syllabus. Spanning across a duration of three months, the initial phase focused on gathering qualitative insights through surveys and interviews with students across various grade levels.
In the subsequent analytical phase, meticulously collected data underwent rigorous examination to discern patterns in student preferences. This eavor sought to identify subjects that enjoyed the highest level of popularity as well as those that were less favored by the student body, thereby offering valuable insights into educational trs and potential areas needing enhancement or reform based on empirical evidence derived from our student populace.
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